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    -Dharga Nagar Safa

Along the memory lane,
Walking, Neolithic Mesopotamians!
A potter pioneering the first wheel stone,
The wooden wheels under the chariots rolling down!
The Wheel rolling up and down endorsing circle of life!
Accelerating the  pace time to time!
The invention of wheel,
An innovation of mobility,
Like the planets,
Computer disk on desk,
The plastic wheel of IT era,
A solar symbol rotating technology!
The wisdom of all time in the direction of civilization,
Simply from  minds of Neolithic men,
Wheel,a vehicle,
Travelled from the forgotten Mesopotamia-
A village deemed of Globe,
To the unseen Global village,
An adventure to reach any time,any where!
Took the burden of feet to it's shoulders,
If not wheels,
Wings,the answer is the question!
Digging the layers of layers of wounded Mesopotamian soil,
Tracing the resting soul,
The pioneering potter,
To offer his long pending royalty!



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  1. Date: 4/16/2014 3:00:00 AM

    Muhammad, I love this.... Everything about it... XOX ~ Linda
  1. Date: 4/16/2014 12:42:00 AM

    I don't know what the purpose is of this "mesopotamian mine-fleld". It reads like list of observations about the changing middle east. But there is nothing to tie the observations together. Its incomplete because it has not central theme. It appears to bea first draft.