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My darling , my dear love , you almost died!
I read the letter and no tears would come
You promised a safe return but you lied
Solemn vow broken as you obeyed battle drum!

I knew you fought in battles deadly fierce
That you could not help but be very brave
Why did you act so rashly to my heart pierce
Chancing a violent death and early grave!

Promise me our vow you will faithfully renew
A love cast oath to soothe my bleeding heart
I could never live on this earth without you
When our living souls we swore to never part!

Swear never again shall I read how you lied!
My darling , my sweet love, you almost died!



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  1. Date: 7/30/2014 5:12:00 PM

    This one has some piss and vinegar you speak of! I sure enjoy the passion, the fight. On one of your comments, For me, as I get older the defiance gets stronger. I am not old by any means, but I will be 40 very soon. Often as children, we never envision making it to that age. 40 seemed grandpa-ish. :)
  1. Date: 7/30/2014 3:47:00 PM

    A lovely heartfelt poem you have written here Robert, filled with loves sweet tenderness. is it for a contest? if so I predict a winner....Peter
  1. Date: 7/30/2014 2:01:00 AM

    A superior devotion over riding selfish emotion. I love the tenacity of this loyalty Robert. " Why did you act so rashly to my heart pierce, chancing a violent death and early grave!" I am enthralled by the magnitude of this expression. This is poetry that everyone should read and respect!
  1. Date: 7/30/2014 1:54:00 AM

    Wow, I was actually thinking of writing something for this,'ve just made it nigh impossible! :) Lovely write, Robert. So full of passion...So beautiful...Longing...very palpable.
  1. Date: 7/30/2014 12:19:00 AM

    Robert, a beautiful sentimental poem of love and commitment with an interesting twist.
  1. Date: 7/29/2014 11:42:00 PM

    A very nice write and a very different perspective on the change. Good luck in the contest.