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Act of cruelty

Act of cruelty

I believe that an act of cruelty
Is to take away child’s security
So let it be said
When two people wed
Make sure it’s a certain surety.

18 April 2014 @ 0815hrs

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  1. Date: 4/18/2014 3:51:00 AM

    Another great piece Vera thank you for standing by Peter and your family through very difficult times and for starting to share with us your great potential. Hugs to you both .....Andy
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 2:10:00 AM

    excellent limerick You have really captured the rythm of this form, Vera: You are on a roll here. Hugs, SuZ
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 2:02:00 AM

    Rhyme is a place that I rarely go. I basically admire those who do. You've done a wonderful job, not only with the rhyme, but also the meaning. Keep it up, look forward to reading more.
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 12:16:00 AM

    You amaze me!!! This is wonderful...and you say you're afraid to write? Beautiful....keep going. What an important theme as well....
  1. Date: 4/17/2014 8:12:00 PM

    A very lovely limerick. they are so hard to write, but you did a wonderful job with this one. Very well done. Love and hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 4/17/2014 8:01:00 PM

    Wow Vera what a great first limerick. my first poem was not even a touch on this one. well done, I am proud of you....Keep writing

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