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COMMENTS

At first I was thrilled you took the time
To read my work and enjoy my rhyme

My highest hope was fully achieved
Someone connected or so I believed

Your words to me were all like miracles
But in reality I was another of your fools

Your comments once made me happy
Your comments once made me glad
Your comments then made me angry
And in the end they made me sad

I realize now you didn't read my work
You cut and pasted to simply gain a perk

Sold your soul for points without worth
You're the saddest creature on the earth

No one may tell you but everyone knows
Your naked motives are fully exposed

Your comments once made me happy
Your comments once made me glad
Your comments then made me angry
And in the end they made me sad

If all you ever have for me are ditto comments let me be
I really don't like being used with your cut and paste views

Yeah,
Your comments once made me happy
Your comments once made me glad
Your comments then made me angry
And in the end they made me sad

Contest: Jack's "Comments"
Date: 8-27-14
Poet: Lyric Man

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  1. Date: 8/27/2014 9:50:00 AM

    Me either..whats the point. BG

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