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She had been perfect

I thought she was perfect the way she was
Long black hair and those gorgeous eyes
Why did she desire another's applause?

He wanted her breasts a larger size
With me there'd be no need to change
Long black hair and those gorgeous eyes

The way she loved him I thought it was strange
He failed to discover the best of her
With me there'd be no need for change

When I think back it's all a blur
I had never been a part of her plan
He failed to discover the best of her

Instead she settled for less of a man
His love affair had been with himself
I had never been a part of her plan

Discarded like a book on a shelf
His love affair had been with himself
I thought she was perfect the way she was
Why did she desire another's applause?

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  1. Date: 10/1/2014 8:13:00 AM

    Its paimful when a woman is blinded by love towards someone whose always trying to make her change.Many times one realizes the bad choice over the years when there is no escape from where to run away.Yes some people who are less than happy with themselves try to change their other half,even manipulating her at times,and make them believe that without them they are nothing.A fine way of bullying.This poem touched my heart for many reasons.Tnks for sharing.
  1. Date: 10/1/2014 6:07:00 AM

    my, a lovely surprise to see you doing a terzanelle, rich... well composed with out a curious touch about how one feels less of herself.. huggs
  1. Date: 9/29/2014 10:41:00 PM

    Richard. ... how did I miss this? My terzanelle.....:-) You just flow in this form. I don't know why life is so complicated, but some things are pure and simple. You are a wonderful man. ..... accepting and loving.
  1. Date: 9/29/2014 7:11:00 AM

    excellent picture painted richard beautifully crafted
  1. Date: 9/28/2014 10:59:00 PM

    There are not too many types of people that I don't like but self centered is tops on my list.
  1. Date: 9/28/2014 7:39:00 PM

    I kid you not, I had to type the code 36D to post last comment!!!!!!
  1. Date: 9/28/2014 7:38:00 PM

    Looks like they both went for the bigger boob! Great poem!
  1. Date: 9/28/2014 7:29:00 PM

    I have no idea..she probably doesn't either. I like this form and don't see it much. Good work my friend. BG

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