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The Most Beautiful

A classic beauty was his luxury Buick Riviera, the name of which would never have stayed with me but for the fact it became a carriage that transported me into magic. His kisses were smoother than the leather seats on which we embraced. As I gazed into the eyes of the most beautiful face - that night and even the name of his car -were seared into my brain.

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  1. Date: 7/12/2014 3:58:00 AM

    Another beautiful leaf in the book of memories. You never fail to come up with the right idea which you manage to express in your own special way. I notice that this is a winning poem....very merited; congrats! // paul
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 7:36:00 PM

    Ah I thought this might be you or Carrie I really appreciated the concrete image of the classic car - ah I even saw the shining chrome in your eyes ... Congrad's Light & Love
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 2:02:00 PM

    Oh, this is just tooooo good, Andrea. Love it. Congratulations.
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 2:00:00 PM

    Sultry eyes, heart glowing skys. Thats what I call erotic mnemonics Andrea. J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 9:06:00 AM

    This was a beauty of a poem. I could just picture it. I had a Buick La Saber. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 6:51:00 AM

    Talk about being on the hot seat. Interesting take on the theme. I bet you weren't thinking of writing a Sijo that night.
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 5:20:00 AM

    Nice Andrea... Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 4:10:00 AM

    N back again wid big congrats Andrea! Awesome write, Perfect win //Upma//
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 1:49:00 AM

    So passionate and romantic!
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 10:32:00 PM

    I'm glad you liked my poems, dear lady and also for your wonderful advice. I'll comment more tomorrow I have to work early, early in the morning dear again thank you. cheri
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 9:59:00 PM

    My first was on a nice hand sewn quilt(her granny's) under a huge shade tree about a mile from my house. I had met my gal there as she had planned and she gave me something I wasn't expecting! Sure seared my brain!!! Fantastic write my friend!! BBBBravoooooo!!!!!
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 9:37:00 PM

    Can't beat that Buick ride. :) Peace. :)
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 4:51:00 PM

    Nice romantic poem Andrea. I hope the love is still as strong today. But I guess it is. Enjoyed this poem, my friend....peter
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 1:40:00 PM

    Truly romantic Andrea my dear friend! Past days r history now,, memorable ,, gl in contest!
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 9:09:00 AM

    Most passionate sijo, most beautiful words, most likely a winner. I have truly enjoyed this read. It fascinated me.
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 9:02:00 AM

    Love in a buick Riviera. Brings back memories. Good stuff, Andrea. Love, Dave
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 7:41:00 AM

    OOh. lucky man. great write much enjoyed take care best wishes Pete
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 6:48:00 AM

    Sounds as tho you found your prince and he had nice wheels!.. Beautiful write Andrea! I expect to see this a winner for sure.. Hugs.. Arlene
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 5:43:00 AM

    Was it the car or the man?..If for a contest, reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 5:43:00 AM

    - Wooow .... Andrea .... "The most beautiful" poem !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/10/2014 5:03:00 AM

    Ah, the carriage that transported you into magic. Such a wonderful poem, Andrea. Times like this being seared into the brain are certainly worth remembering. I had a Buick Wildcat in 1969 and it seemed to fit my personality perfectly. Those were the days, my friend. Beautiful poem and very enjoyable to read.... Robert.
  1. Date: 7/9/2014 10:47:00 PM

    Reminds me of certain times in my car. I don't have a car now since I live in Manhattan where it is not needed. I,too have memories "seared into my brain". Peace & Love Matthew Anish
  1. Date: 7/9/2014 9:25:00 PM

    Oh my ;)
  1. Date: 7/9/2014 9:02:00 PM

    Drive In, popcorn and all that went with it
  1. Date: 7/9/2014 8:43:00 PM

    Hey thanks for the great review of my locomotive, and yes I love to do historical writes the most, I'm thinking of doing one on the Red Baron. what do you think my friend honestly? Love your poem also my friend a very passionate work, with great visual imagery. I like the first lines the best, you go girl. Cheri
  1. Date: 7/9/2014 8:03:00 PM

    Wonderful Andrea....Young romance is unforgettable....hugs Tim

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