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Excessive Casualness

A tender kiss upon the brow
has precious little meaning now.
When fornication simply states
a need for pleasure without delay.



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  1. Date: 10/22/2014 4:03:00 PM

    sweet beautiful piece timothy when i kiss a woman on the brow it normally means loving that soul deeply
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 4:37:00 AM

    Theres so much obsession with sex these days that most people tend to forget about what real love is all about it. We got a very disposable society too even when it comes to relatonships. Very sad indeed! That's why so many divorces and families torn apart. Well expressed poem, Tim! Cheers! :) Xxxxx D.
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 10:41:00 PM

    Good observation, Timothy ...yes making love 'at' someone rather than to them really ...a total difference.
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 4:13:00 PM

    This is SO good. It is a big pet peeve of mine, how casual the world has become with something that should be taken much more seriously. Awesome, Timothy.
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 9:27:00 AM

    Yes, too little time is taken for tenderness. Light & Love
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 4:13:00 AM

    I love the kiss on the brow as much as what follows..What follows might be sensual..But darn I love romance..Sweet poem.
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 3:38:00 AM

    My mind doesn't go in bizarre places, friend, no more than yours –haha! Can you deny the logic and consequence of my square meal? I didn't think so. / Maurice
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 3:15:00 AM

    No, Timothy...that isn't always true. There is a time and place for a tender kiss upon the brow....Yes, I understand the heart of your write. It is very beautiful.