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chasing the wind

Don’t follow the one 
who chases after the wind
You’ll be lead too far away 
from integrity 
Let him escape with the breeze
as it pushes through the trees
Don’t dance to the tune
of the melody of fools 
You’ll wind up dancing alone
Be true to yourself
and the ones who deserve you 
Don’t dance where the wind has blown


5/23/2013 ~ First attempt at form

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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:45:00 AM

    You have done very well with your first attempt at a Choka my friend! You have enlightened me with this incredible poem! What a stupendous piece, such a fantastic poem! Great Work!!
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:17:00 AM

    You did this form justice! Nicely done, Becca!
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:19:00 AM

    - Becca, it is beautifully written - Good work - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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