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Amputation

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Amputation


The door shuts lightly behind me


soft click


metallic boundaries


I turn around to see,
that you are the one that closed it. 


And I swallow


a storm. 


 

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  1. Date: 11/30/2008 12:43:00 PM
    Wow...this was powerfully said in your brief poem! Well done. Congratulations on this poem being featured this week. ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 11/29/2008 10:19:00 PM
    Julia - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Great Job & God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 11/28/2008 2:29:00 AM
    Lot said in brief Poem. Powerfully expressed

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 6:51:00 PM
    Congratulations julia on your featured write "Amputation." Vince

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 9:59:00 AM
    Wow. Heavy duty excellent write. Congrats on a great featured poem. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 7:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/23/2008 11:40:00 PM
    Great write, Julia. So much said in so few words. congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Well deserved. Love, Nigel

  1. Date: 11/23/2008 10:05:00 PM
    I understand this is a very emotional poem. Great visual. I hope the storm is over. Congratulations on being featured. My blessings with you! Love, Chitra

  1. Date: 11/23/2008 6:54:00 PM
    This is a powerful poem. The short lines and imagery work well. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen