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The Promise of Spring - A Fibonacci

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The Promise of Spring - A Fibonacci

I 
Will
Kiss you
While you sleep
Lady dressed in white
And melt your cold heart  made of ice

Then
You
Will rise
Liquefied
High into the sky
And fall as raindrops from God’s eyes

To
The 
Waiting
Buds below
Where now you will grow
With me - in the bloom of a rose


           ~~~
Author:  Elaine George


* Note:  This poem is a Personification as well as a triple Fibonacci

Brian Strand's 'Image Contest':     First Place
John Heck's  '12-in-one' Contest:  First Place

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  1. Date: 2/28/2011 6:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in John's contest Lainie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 11:19:00 AM
    Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 9:22:00 AM
    Super congrats on your beautiful & awesome write here, such an amazing job you did here Lainie :)

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 6:21:00 AM
    CONGRATS, Elaine! Peace always, John

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 6:00:00 AM
    congratulations to you Elaine.

  1. Date: 2/27/2011 12:06:00 AM
    way to go in this wonderful contest, Lainie, I am glad that I got to see it here because this was a gem of yours I had missed! Luv,Andrea

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 10:49:00 PM
    Hi Elaine - this Fibonacci reads like a soft and soothing lullabye. Sweet and embracing. So very inviting. Congrats on your #1 WIN in Mr. Heck's contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 9:30:00 PM
    really extraordinary, elaine! my happy cheers to you for the fine win :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 7:10:00 PM
    Awesome job , good to see you with a top spot, Elaine. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 6:36:00 PM
    Excellent use of personification in this fibonacci form! I especially like the middle one. Elaine, congratulations on your win in John's contest!~Chris

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 5:07:00 PM
    exotic verse from an exotic woman congrad's on your fine win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 4:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 2:21:00 PM
    You have written another breath-taking poem ....so beautifully!! Congratulations dear, Elaine!!

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 2:15:00 PM
    An awesome write from you Elaine!Congrats on your 1st place win!---kashinath

  1. Date: 2/26/2011 12:57:00 PM
    Congrats Lainie on your first place win in John's contest my friend.. amazing as always .. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 1:18:00 PM
    This is a gorgeous piece, Elaine. You've created a moment and mood for all of the senses. So creatively and beautifully done! Congrats on your First place honor! Donna

  1. Date: 8/21/2008 10:25:00 AM
    I've been out of net Eaine so this is my first opportunity to congratulate you on this well deserved win. All the best - ED

  1. Date: 7/17/2008 5:16:00 AM
    Love thee form here and the imagery you create is absolutely amazing. Love this read! Michael