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Diffidence

It’s like walking through
The ice chips of
A sun fire –

It’s like standing atop
The falling rain of
A lonely sea –

It’s like sleeping amidst
The misty shroud of
A day moon –

Similar to crouching
In between cloudless
Rays of white –

Identical to clutching
The solid pebbles
Of spitting air –

The distance that
Lingers between
You and I –

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  1. Date: 8/4/2008 8:22:00 PM

    i like that line walking through the ice chips a sun fire a vivid imagery is a great way to decribe this beautiful poem.