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You

You came into my life like the season of spring
With a dream, around my figure a wedding ring

You changed me to what you wanted me to be
It’s through your eyes, the word now I see

You changed my simplicity to glamour 
Change my world, by painting your color

You changed my whole life as you desired
Slowly, everything of me you acquired 

You caused me anguish by your brutal speech
And explained, it was only an intent to teach

You claimed, it was all for me to be the best
So with faith in you, I build my dream of nest

You came with love and now have gone forever
The reasons for which I will not be told ever

You converted my dreams into a night mare
Trust again someone, my heart will never dare.

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  1. Date: 4/13/2009 12:25:00 PM
    Impressive. All the best.