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Make-Over Invitation

I may not have felt it, but I thought I LOOKED young
Till my children pointed out just how and where I was wrong

A few wrinkles here and some sagging there
One side drooped more and a drain full of hair

While they took their time and showed me, little did they know
That had it not been for them, I'd still look 20 years old

So once they finished adding stress lines and a few more grays...
I stopped crying and called Mary Kay!!




...just wanted my party invite to be unique

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  1. Date: 3/9/2012 8:44:00 AM

    It is always a pleasure to read your poetry F. J. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 3/9/2012 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you ma'am; it's nice to have a little more time to experience the talents of others.