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Return of She

Broken pieces of glasses
moves around the high-way
while water flows away,
Lights were drizzling
over the road - nearby
woods were mangrove
and someone,
someone was crying
between the hearts

I saw,
her shadow
Standing still scared

Over the walking sands

Somehow, Somewhere She is ....

The Wind
The Blood
The Glass

Bounces and flies

A floating glass runs way ! Returns the long trail

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  1. Date: 11/20/2008 8:35:00 PM

    Thanks Maryam !!

  1. Date: 11/20/2008 9:08:00 AM

    Ive just joined this site but your poetry is amazing I really like the way the rhythm goes, you deserve that spot out there. good work keep it up.

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 5:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/17/2008 2:48:00 PM

    Much to think about here. The last line gives this poem a strong end. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 11/17/2008 12:40:00 PM

    Well done, Javed. An excellent poem and form! ~ Congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 11/17/2008 10:09:00 AM

    Congratulations Javed on "Reurn of She" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince