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Love.Doc

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Love.Doc

With supernovas crashing down my head
What was once black turns red instead
Dull ideas flashing in my brain
Moves as fast as a bullet train

The girls dance like swaying trees
Trying so hard like those wannabes
Still one thing really haunts my mind
That even the wisest man cannot define

Was it you who made my dreams shatter?
With your promises melting like butter
Always praying for us to be together
But if I asked, you won't even bother

When love's eyes melt, she's so uncool
The body is shivering like a twisted fool
Everything sucks like a blackhole sun
Like this poem that is left undone

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  1. Date: 5/21/2011 7:14:00 AM

    good one! intense like her reaction on YOU! and UNDONE is a great word and thought & ending! chaos! Light & Love