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Firecrackers (Alliterations)

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Firecrackers (Alliterations)

In a pick pack boom a wonderful light in the sky
Beaming gleaming screaming people out in the street
Watching the parade of light danced, glanced tranced
Happy sappy snappy to watch the firecrackers so beautifully
Amazing as it make the sky lively sparkly wonderfully
It shone in the dark out in the park making the mark
A sign of celebration in a cloud nine look so divine
Graces in the space a part of beauty to embrace

22/9/07

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  1. Date: 11/10/2008 4:34:00 PM

    Cleverly written. Fun to read! Congratulations on being featured this week!!~ Carrie

    empino Avatar lena empino Date: 11/3/2013 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks. :)
  1. Date: 11/10/2008 8:08:00 AM

    Congratulations Lena on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar

    empino Avatar lena empino Date: 11/3/2013 9:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks I didn't expect it. :)
  1. Date: 11/10/2008 4:05:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol

    empino Avatar lena empino Date: 11/3/2013 9:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks. :)
  1. Date: 11/9/2008 5:05:00 PM

    Congratulations Lena on your alliteration being featured. Vince

    empino Avatar lena empino Date: 11/3/2013 9:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks. :)
  1. Date: 11/9/2008 4:08:00 PM

    Nice use of rhyme and alliteration to provide rhythm to this poem. Congratulations on having featured this week. Best wishes for ongoing success with your writing. Karen

    empino Avatar lena empino Date: 11/3/2013 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks.:)
  1. Date: 7/17/2008 1:23:00 AM

    Alliterations are always a blast to read, although the form of this poem seems to be something else. Anyway, you make firecrackers sound magical, as it is. Better watch out for the firecracker shows in that gigantic mall, if you know what I mean.

    empino Avatar lena empino Date: 11/3/2013 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks. :)