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Woman In A Cloud

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Woman In A Cloud

I watched a while on a summer's day,
Above the field in which I lay:
The clouds take form and assume their place,
And in one I saw a face.
A face obscure and yet familiar.
What name that face? Twas sweet Delia!
For one brief moment I saw her peer;
I felt a subtle grayness near.
That shade of gray between dream and sleep,
When thoughts we think, but do not keep.
I watched a while and in conscious thought,
The elusive dream at last I caught.

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  1. Date: 11/30/2008 6:59:00 AM
    Ashley - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 4:30:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals Ashley. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/11/2008 8:31:00 AM
    Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/8/2008 10:14:00 AM
    Ashley - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

  1. Date: 7/30/2008 4:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ashley. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/29/2008 6:28:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured poem great flow! Laura

  1. Date: 7/29/2008 4:21:00 PM
    Interesting reflection. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 7/28/2008 6:39:00 AM
    Congratulations Ashley, on "Woman in a Cloud" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 7/28/2008 6:22:00 AM
    Very beautiful! Congratulations Ashley on being featured this week. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 7/27/2008 8:30:00 PM
    Excellent flow in this poem - a pleasure to read - congrats on being featured this week