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Wondrous Kite

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Wondrous Kite

She walks away.

Girlish and glorious
laughter
floats
through air
like a kite on a string
that pulls
tautly slipping through tightened fingers,
burning a little,
and slicing through 
if ever left unattended,

so preciously tensioned
against the cold
benumbing
wind. 

Tears begin to flow
but I do not know . . .
my heart?
or the wind?
If my heart, then am I sad
to be here on the ground
or joyful
to be watching the kite
fly? 

In answer, a quivering.

A wisp.

"She will not fall or float away while I hold her thus. 
She will be beautiful for me."

Wondrous.

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  1. Date: 11/30/2008 7:46:00 AM
    Jonathon - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

  1. Date: 11/17/2008 8:44:00 AM
    Jonathon - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

  1. Date: 11/13/2008 3:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/11/2008 8:21:00 AM
    Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 8/9/2008 7:33:00 PM
    Wonderful comparisons in this poem. congratulations on your well deserved feature, dear Jonathon. Lainie

  1. Date: 8/5/2008 5:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on this beautiful poem being featured once again. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 8/4/2008 8:45:00 PM
    congratulations on your poem being featured this week! very well deserve! nice write warm regard GiNo,18,Philippines

  1. Date: 8/4/2008 12:23:00 PM
    congrats on having such a flowing and joyful poem featured,this really makes me feel all a sudden sun drenched.

  1. Date: 8/4/2008 7:00:00 AM
    Jonathon - great job - congrats on being featured this week

  1. Date: 8/4/2008 5:50:00 AM
    Back again for another feature. Congratulations Jonathon. Vince