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Colorado Storm

It splinters the sky
Light abounding
Blocking the sun
Blackness surrounding
Crackling for miles
Its loud but exciting
Shattering my thoughts
Its rain so inviting
A wall of clouds
Moving and tortured
Here comes the danger
Beauty enraptured
A drum beat, a flash
A deafening sound
Heavy rain falling 
On wet, sodden ground

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  1. Date: 10/1/2011 9:08:00 PM

    What a vivid description of a storm. Almost wanted to be out in it.Thanks for your visit and encouraging words my friend. :)

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 1:21:00 PM

    I live in Denver and have for 34 years and i can relate to this one. a great piece you wrote.

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 11:04:00 PM

    Hi sweetie, Amazing images of the storm in your verse. I find storms so exciting and love to be out in it. You tell it so well.

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 10:15:00 PM

    I love the flow of your words, Windyann! I read them without breathing! Beautiful images, my friend! Great job. Ruben.