Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places



Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

So Broken

Joseph Granda-Padron Avatar    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled So Broken which was written by poet Joseph Granda-Padron. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Joseph Granda-Padron

Best Joseph Granda-Padron Poems

+ Fav Poet

So Broken

This place we're at
Is as broken
As the currents
Of my wretched heart - soul
And whatever the hell else makes
Me who you think I am.

The walls bleed with Vodka and I want
It more and more and more and
When you look at me
I don't have to confess...
You already know
It's on my breath.

I wanted to sing you a song
Before we made love
But the drink carried me off and 
Deserted
Me half alive on a dream
Across the world.

Tomorrow,
Hung over and torn with regret,
I shall look at you
And wish the pain of my
Beaten miserable past
Would abandon it's torment of 
Our future.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 4/8/2009 9:59:00 AM
    Powerful, and great. I love this poem truly. Everything else has no need to be said, or already is. great write. Love, Jessica

  1. Date: 1/7/2009 1:23:00 AM
    Powerful writing... reminds me of a short story by Carson McCullers about alcoholism - '...and sorrow parallels desire in the immense complexity of love' - her last line. BRAVO Joseph! Best wishes, Keith