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who sees what?

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who sees what?

now that you're gone 
i miss you
now that you're no longer available
i wish for you to be shared
even though the can see you
and other geniuses can figure out the code of computers
to see what's hiding in the shadows of this site
oh dear detective
with the hoisting and songs
what poems of mine lurk there
that the audience I've written to can't see 
but you do
and you get the music and images?

should I describe the color of the eyes and then the poem and tell them the 
name of the song
should i
could i
how do i share this experience?
now that they are alone and ignored somewhere buried beneath the matrix
Its a nonexistent crime i tell you dear neo or morpheus or oracle
they can see what I've written
but some of my poems like the ones that have
they are silently undercover for the  fools of mensa geniuses

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