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Made me smile - Comment Contest

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Made me smile - Comment Contest

A lovely comment I received
I treated it as fun
Surmised I was a girl from the east
With attributes per sun

Thought I might have been
delicate and womanly
As though I am not, for sure
I wonder if she thinks that I'm
A great big boring Boar

I know when she reads these lines
She will laugh and be pleased
That her comments made such an impression
That I could write these words with ease

So now I leave with my thoughts untold
To write more poetry, for you to behold.
Shall I write with pizzazz with a flare
Or just be boring me like my usual fare


For Jack's comment contest.

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  1. Date: 8/29/2014 10:19:00 PM
    Congrats to you....hugs Tim :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/29/2014 10:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tim, didn't we do well, lol......Seren
  1. Date: 8/29/2014 4:38:00 PM
    Seren, congratulations on this top win. You inspire me to be me. Verlena

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/29/2014 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Verlena, hmm do I, if that's true, I am chuffed.....Seren
  1. Date: 8/29/2014 3:53:00 PM
    we all share the podium many congrats Seren:-) Hugs jan xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/29/2014 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol it was a fun contest, glad we all shared ....Seren
  1. Date: 8/18/2014 4:25:00 AM
    Loved the humour here:-) Good luck with the contest.Hugs jan xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/18/2014 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol when she see's the write she will laugh I hope......Seren
  1. Date: 8/18/2014 3:50:00 AM
    That's a very lovely write Seren! Good luck to u my dear!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/18/2014 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dr Upma .....Seren