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Found a new friend, love her a lot Country charm is what she's got An absolute sweetie through and through Her tender heart shines, bright and true Knew right away she was sumptin' special In her down home charm I've started to revel Love the lingo from back in the hills She promised to use it, sure hope she will Dagnabbit, she's gone and done blowed me away As she prances round with that old sashay Her charms overflow, so hard to resist Ain't gonna try, just enjoy the bliss Sure don't wanna make her feel uncomfortable But this dearest new friend is simply adorable Found a new friend, I sure love her a lot Her closest friends all call here Tot © Jack Ellison 2014

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  1. Date: 8/18/2014 11:03:00 AM
    Does she call her children the li'll Tator Tots... Sorry couldn't help my self... Spent a good portion of my childhood in the Ozark Hills in Missouri... This poem brings back fond memories.... yaw all.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/18/2014 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ozark Hills... that sure sounds back woodsy! LOL Happy to hear from you dear Carol... was worried about you! XOXOX
  1. Date: 8/16/2014 2:20:00 PM
    Aww now danged if that wasn't the sweetest surprise ever darlin' friend Jack to see you wrote a sweet lil' ol' poem for this ol' country girl! Bless your precious lil' ol' heart! What a wonderful feller you are...your words so warm they melt like butter on a biscuit. Sending you some big ol' country hugs and love today hon'... Mary Jo {tot}xo

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/16/2014 10:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello li'l darlin'... love those biscuits and gravy at Bob Evans! Haven't been down your way for a few years! ALWAYS enjoyed that southern hospitality! Big squeezy hugs, Jack XOXOX
  1. Date: 8/16/2014 12:12:00 PM
    Hats off to u Jack ! All regards to men who truly feel that we all r so special ! Thanks for sharing ur inspiring poetry n ur views! Glad having met u at soup dear friend!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/16/2014 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And my life has been enriched greatly since meeting you, my dear Dr. Upma! Thank you, you are very special... big huggles, Jack XOXOX
  1. Date: 8/16/2014 12:03:00 PM
    Appreciate your honest reply ! Blessed to know my dear dear friend !

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/16/2014 12:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ALL ladies are special in my eyes, dearest Upma! XOXOX
  1. Date: 8/16/2014 11:55:00 AM
    But why only lady friends as u specified ? Lol No harm anyways my friend ! Love knows no boundaries !

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/16/2014 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Coz I love the ladies!!!!!!!!! LOL Yum!
  1. Date: 8/16/2014 11:32:00 AM
    Oh wow Jack , a new friend u hv got , n u love her a lot ! Must be quite a fortunate one ! Tugged at ur heartstrings !!!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/16/2014 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes... love her a lot but love lots of my Poetry Soup lady friends! LOL Love, Jack XOX