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Oh Goddess Moon

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Oh Goddess Moon

Oh Goddess Moon, you induce painters to paint,
the crazed to rave and poets to praise your grace.
How many love affairs have you helped to consummate?
With a woman’s many wiles, you change your shape.
How you beguile, yet never do you vacillate.
You stay your course and never stray!

Like yin to yang, you are to sun a cool and pallid pool,
changing, yet constant in your rule 
as you steadfastly move from New to Quarter To Gibbous to Full, 
and then you wane . . . 
till in Crescent Balsamic you reign -
there to shortly contemplate the wisdom you have gained.
Your fortnight ended, you journey back again.

We all beneath you are an ocean mystically pulled,
heirs to the gifts you weave at the time we are born.
Like our predecessors who learned to heed
your rhythmic sounds as they planted seed,
it would behoove us, with our vast technology,
to stop and study the sky, your teachings there to see!

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  1. Date: 9/13/2014 11:41:00 AM
    This sure is a Beauty, Andrea!! I really love how you spoke to the moon here, and just put the spotlight on her, you sure covered so much in this artfully written poem, and as always you make it look so easy, how you made everything flow and melodic. I love poems about the moon, and this one really shows how much of an inspiration it can be-- I've always wanted to include all the phases of the moon, and you did so here, with such grace--in a word-- I find this poem to be Divine!

  1. Date: 9/4/2014 7:50:00 AM
    A truly impressive win with few winners Andrea. I knew this one would come in on top. Big congrats. Love to see this posted at pft. Hugs, Connie

  1. Date: 9/3/2014 3:49:00 PM
    glad to see this tops! i love it girl!

  1. Date: 9/3/2014 3:38:00 PM
    A piece of the Goddess of poetry again. I adore this one.. Congrats and respect for THIS write..

  1. Date: 8/31/2014 10:28:00 PM
    all the way to the top with this lyrical interpretation of luna... my bestest congrats, andie!

  1. Date: 8/31/2014 12:32:00 PM
    Beautiful and lovely piece,Andrea..congrats on your win..

  1. Date: 8/31/2014 9:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win... Love and prayers, Gina

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 11:24:00 PM
    Real serene n wow write Andrea! Congrats on top place win!

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 9:30:00 PM
    Ah yes ....brilliant write Andrea...Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 7:24:00 PM
    Andrea, what a smooth flow, just like the cycle of the moon you portrayed. congrats. Mohan

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 4:52:00 PM
    Andrea strikes again ! I wish I could weave words of this caliber; you are awesome ! "...there to shortly contemplate the wisdom you have gained"...I think the wisdom is all your own, reflected in this VERY GOOD poem. I love you, Andrea !

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 4:47:00 PM
    Prodigious winner..Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 4:18:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 3:33:00 PM
    Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 1:51:00 PM
    Beautiful and lovely piece,Andrea..Congrats on your superb win..

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 1:31:00 PM
    many congrats on hitting the top sport. Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 12:52:00 PM
    If the moon could only read this I'm sure it would be honored. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 8/30/2014 12:45:00 PM
    stunning as always, congrats on making the winners list in my contest Andrea

  1. Date: 8/21/2014 11:05:00 PM
    goddess moon indeed. i luv this. makes me feel one w/ the universe

  1. Date: 8/20/2014 8:37:00 AM
    Great write Andrea....I love it...hugs

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