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Veil of Obscurity

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Below is the poem entitled Veil of Obscurity which was written by poet DaQuan Bowrin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Veil of Obscurity

I'm hiding behind this,
Veil of obscurity,
Because I don't want people,
To see who I really am,
This veil of obscurity is like a mask,
A mask that hides my true emotions,
I may smile and laugh with my friends,
But behind this veil of obscurity,
I'm lonely, sad, and depressed,
I strive to show the real me,
But I hide behind this,
Veil of obscurity,
Because I'm scared of being rejected,
By my friends and family,
So I hide behind this,
Veil of obscurity,
Hoping that someday I can stop hiding behind this,
Veil of obscurity,
And show the real me,

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  1. Date: 8/12/2014 12:43:00 PM
    Nice write, I hope you find a way to take off that mask.

    Bowrin Avatar DaQuan Bowrin
    Date: 8/12/2014 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks