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INSPIRATION BLOOMS

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INSPIRATION BLOOMS


Flushed hands spill passion, softly wild
In languid explosion words rise
With heaves of angst and rapture piled,
Spewing phrases... untamed, unwise.
 
As rhymes burst, whirls form in my chest
From twilight laced ...hours rile again,
Down fingertips my soul’s unrest
To bathe on verses from dripped pen.
 
A language of fire scents my mood
That aches when love and rage entwine;
Till inspiration blooms, renewed             
Beneath stars, veiled words lift my spine.
 
In the marrow, blot of ink clears
Offering a page new frontiers.


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Regina Riddle's Writing Contest
8/11/2014

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  1. Date: 8/14/2014 6:21:00 PM
    Spectacular, Well done on your marvelous win sweetie :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2014 8:31:00 AM
    I love reading them (Sonnets) if only I could write them. I will leave that to great poets such as you Nette. I enjoyed this one very much. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/14/2014 1:32:00 AM
    Beautiful...pages with new frontiers, it cant get more deeper than that, Nette! Your poems delight!

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 8:34:00 PM
    Sometimes it feels so good to be unwise, and our eyes deny compromise of love. You've got a great Muse Nette. " Languid explosion....A language of fire scents my mood" superb poetics! This poem has got me hot for Autumn.

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 6:36:00 PM
    Great job Nette. Love the first stanza.

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 2:50:00 PM
    It can almost be painful sometimes when we want to write and the inspiration just isn't there.... You have expressed the feeling of a poet's frustrations and then a relief through the process of writing. This is a really beautiful poem, Nette! Nicely done! Hugs :)

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 9:46:00 AM
    fav lines [ A language of fire scents my mood That aches when love and rage entwine;] Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 8:40:00 AM
    This is quite beautiful!

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 7:06:00 AM
    back again with my congrats Nette am honoured to share the podium with you! hugs jan xxx

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 7:02:00 AM
    Back again wid big congrats on ur first place win Nette!

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 6:24:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "Writing" - sponsored by: Regina Riddle - Really deserved, dear Nette ! -oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 4:52:00 AM
    Worth taking inspiration from your writing, nette. congrats

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 8:36:00 PM
    How gloriously you describe the use of your precious gift nette...hugs Tim

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 5:57:00 PM
    Gorgeous images and wow, how nice to see you do a sonnet. That is the form I chose for this contest too!

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 5:46:00 PM
    Simply put keep spilling the ink dear lady, And I will read your words of wonderment, Every time you post it. Great job good luck in the contest. cheri, and thanks for your comment with all my heart and soul.

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 5:12:00 PM
    Frontiers to go anywhere and do anything..Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 2:58:00 PM
    Nette, you already know how I feel about your writing, this is another addition to your writing treasures. I'll be seeing this on the winner's list for sure. Have a blessed day sweetie. oxox Gail

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 12:46:00 PM
    You have captured the essence of a poetic experience with pang and joy, Nette. Unbelievable in every way! Happy to note you liked my pathya piece. Thank you!

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 12:18:00 PM
    You write with a soft hand but a mighty pen proceeds, always enjoyment in every word I read, love from afar xxx

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 11:56:00 AM
    Inspiration Blooms in the Nette Pot of Golden Flowers!!!! this , my friend, is quite Freaking MAGNIFICIENT! Your best poem to date!,,,That I've experienced anyway! And we've read a lot of yir' stuff round these here parts Ma'am...In my southern voice! -tip of the Hat and a nod, with a straw stick in my teeth, Overall BritcheZ on! Ok, back to reality.///You Nailed this, "THE LANGUAGE" yes poetry is a LANGUAGE NETTY. of "FIRE", "IN MY CHEST", yes, that's where they form NETTE! 7RATE fAVE.fAVE pOET

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