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  1. Date: 8/19/2014 11:03:00 PM
    yes and now " GAZA" will the hate end .. hands up- don't don't shoot. Great writing Lovely sentiments

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 8/20/2014 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I don't think so, it's familial hate - they are all from the same root and all fighting to be Father's favorite child - immature unevolved human children - siblings fighting constantly
  1. Date: 8/14/2014 8:06:00 PM
    wonderful, brave, beautifully constructed. love one love all. always people before theories.

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 8:25:00 PM
    It is so sad, Debbie, that many religious people, those who call themselves Christians included, have done horrible, godless things in the name of God. I fear that they have made their religious rules their god, rather than God. My heart is broken for what is happening in Iraq right now...what is happening in the Sudan and Lybia. True Christians need to live what they say they believe and never persecute others for their beliefs. I am sorry this has not always been the case.

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 8/13/2014 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Faye for the understanding.
  1. Date: 8/12/2014 2:34:00 PM
    They were taught this by listening to their parents, they were only children too.

  1. Date: 8/12/2014 2:20:00 PM
    Brave girl you, for sharing this, telling it all and spilling it out. Truth must be revealed in order for change to occur. Such a beauty of a poem, despite its pain. This is one of those that I didn't want to chop up with "favourite lines" or "oh, I see right there, RIGHT THERE, what you did, sooo good" I think I'll just let it be, without opening its veins. It has poignancy and I know should be in print. Honey, I have an idea.. just now.... I know the United Church of Canada would love this.

    MacMillan Avatar Cyndi MacMillan
    Date: 8/12/2014 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Read just last night:
    MacMillan Avatar Cyndi MacMillan
    Date: 8/12/2014 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Okay, you're going to think I'm really off the deep end (lol. more than usual) but here. They usually don't do poetry. But somehow I feel this would move them and you might be that 1 in a million. Believe it or not, a Christian magazine would publish this. No follower of Christ would do this. xoxox Your Dee
    MacMillan Avatar Cyndi MacMillan
    Date: 8/12/2014 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hmmmm.... I wonder.....
  1. Date: 8/12/2014 2:16:00 PM
    This is done to millions of children each day- today they would mostly be Muslim or Sihk. Prayer is not enough. It is up to the parents of this generation to LIVE what they preach. I am exposing Verity to world religions and the beautiful shades of peoples around the globe (only through books now... it is so vanilla, now, where we live) ... Verity just learned about Moses, what a slave is... so HARD... H.A.R.D... to explain!!! And what of the Kurdish now in Iraq? Babies starving on a mountain.

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 6:16:00 PM
    'these are not "real" Christians who do these things, Deb. The words that define people are often incorrectly given to people who do not deserve them. It's a shame what is done in the name of religion every day across the world, but i have much admiration for those with the love of the creator in their hearts.

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 4:07:00 PM
    Debbie I fully understand what you are saying, I have looked at the hypocrisy in many religious people forever, and I can never understand it. They have taken the beautiful words of Jesus and made a mockery of them. I have my own views on God, but organized religion leaves me cold. This is a really great poem, in fact one of the best I have seen, my friend....Peter

  1. Date: 8/10/2014 10:41:00 AM
    Posted from internet Explorer cut pasted from MS WORD hmmm GOOD!