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Horse like speed - Pathya Va

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Horse like speed - Pathya Va



Chariots fly
With horse like speed
To lead the field
In war so dark


The Hittite ruled
Kadesh attacked
known battle track
Five thousand fought. 




Hittite renowned charioteers 
Hittites conquered Kadesh
Five thousand chariots took part was the largest chariot battle ever





Penned by Seren Roberts on August 4th 2014



Contest: Ride on a Pathya Va. By Nette Onclaud

Theme:  I used the Chariot Theme.



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  1. Date: 8/11/2014 7:32:00 PM
    awesome and educational, grats on your win!!

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 6:50:00 AM
    your historical notes and powerful visuals make this piece an interesting one, seren..thanks for supporting my contest and big cheers on your splendid win..huggs

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 5:41:00 AM
    Congrats on ur winning awesome write Seren!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/11/2014 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Dr Upma ....glad you liked it ....Seren
  1. Date: 8/10/2014 11:11:00 AM
    Congrats to you Seren...love the history

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/10/2014 8:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you .....Seren
  1. Date: 8/10/2014 9:24:00 AM
    congrats on a lovely win Seren:-) Hugs jan xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/10/2014 8:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jan ....Seren
  1. Date: 8/10/2014 6:12:00 AM
    lovely win Seren, Congrats. Mohan

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/10/2014 7:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you I didn't see my name on the list, congrats to you also ....Seren
  1. Date: 8/10/2014 5:28:00 AM
    What a fine approach to the theme of the poem, congrats, Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 8/10/2014 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ram I was unsure as to what I wax doing if I am totally honest......Seren