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Don't pull me up

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Below is the poem entitled Don't pull me up which was written by poet Antonio Swider. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Don't pull me up

When we first got together
we where dying to evade the
vicious cycle of mistakes that
both of us had made.
but we culddn't figure it out so
we fall out of a lovers embrace.

Don't pull me up
i might just break your hands
sometimes we need to fall back down
for us to understand
Don't pull me up
i might just break your hands
Sometimes we need to fall back down
for us to understand

Im lying here in shadows
hiding from all my mistakes
yet they always seem to find me and
it seems like i can never catch a break
memories that haunt us they're
replaying all of our fates giving
me an uneasyness that i can't
seem to shake!

don't pull me up
i might just break your hands
sometimes we need to fall back down
for us to understand.
don't pull me up
i might just break your hands
sometimes we need to fall back down
for us to understand

i know you've given me all
the sympathy that you think that i'm
allowed. don't you know that it's killing me
yes your killing me
but i cannot let you down
i'm gonna get up
even if it's on my own
i think i've had enough
i'm no longer yours too drown.
let are hands part now i must
go away!

Don't pull me up
i might just break your hands
sometimes we need to fall back down
for us to understand
don't pull me up
don't pull me up
i need to understand!

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  1. Date: 8/2/2014 8:50:00 PM
    Antonio, nice lyrics my friend. Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!

    Swider Avatar Antonio Swider
    Date: 8/20/2014 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i def will . and thank you
  1. Date: 7/31/2014 8:49:00 PM
    Very good lyrics! I agree sometimes you just got to walk away from a relationship, even with good intentions it might hurt too much. I like that chorus. well done!

    Swider Avatar Antonio Swider
    Date: 7/31/2014 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much! that means so much to me. yeah sometimes you just really have to let go