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Attack

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Below is the poem entitled Attack which was written by poet Antonio Swider. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Attack

"I'm bleeding
do you think you can patch me up?
oh the ceiling is
starting to spin around
and around and
this feeling
my arms are tingling
hating and seething
i think that i am
panicking!

Attack an Attack
my body turns on me
i can't react
the world is falling all around me
An attack an Attack
my face is numb
soon i'll hit the ground
and no one's going to save 
me any how.

Breathing is shallow
much like a wave
put me on a stretcher
and carry me so far away
the thoughts in my head
are starting to race
my body is seizing
i think i'm panicking...

Attack an Attack
my body turns on me
i can't react
this world is falling
all around me
An attack an Attack
my face is going numb
soon i'll hit the ground
cuz no one's here to 
save me any how.

Panic attack
an attack an attack
panic attack
panic
attack!"

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  1. Date: 8/20/2014 6:32:00 PM
    I can relate to this poem. I could feel every movement as if I was there

    Swider Avatar Antonio Swider
    Date: 8/20/2014 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yeah it comes straight from experience. i posted a few new ones tonight too. thank you so much
  1. Date: 8/14/2014 9:40:00 PM
    Antonio, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA

    Swider Avatar Antonio Swider
    Date: 8/20/2014 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much!!!
  1. Date: 8/12/2014 11:59:00 AM
    This kind of battle just isn't good. Love it and can relate to it.

    Swider Avatar Antonio Swider
    Date: 8/20/2014 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you
  1. Date: 8/12/2014 9:33:00 AM
    war is no good..like this

    Swider Avatar Antonio Swider
    Date: 8/20/2014 6:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    war is a real bad thing..
  1. Date: 8/6/2014 10:50:00 PM
    THANK YOU FOR THE REPLY

    Swider Avatar Antonio Swider
    Date: 8/20/2014 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    anytime! thank you for reading me
  1. Date: 8/1/2014 1:32:00 PM
    - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Antonio :) - I choose your first very well written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Swider Avatar Antonio Swider
    Date: 8/20/2014 6:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you. i def will
  1. Date: 7/31/2014 12:27:00 AM
    I like your out spoken poem Antonio,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ @-> LINDA <-@

    Swider Avatar Antonio Swider
    Date: 7/31/2014 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much. i will definately check it out