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you took my hand

Seren Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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you took my hand

Held out my hand
You took it.
I did not comprehend,
Held out my hand,
Life is one big demand.
Said "Come let us sit",
Held out my hand
You took it.
Wants to be my friend.

Penned 23/07/2014

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  1. Date: 7/23/2014 8:09:00 AM
    Lovely sweet write Seren,, loved it //

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/23/2014 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haven't tried this form before...thank you Seren
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 11:56:00 PM
    Charming... Short and sweet Seren...hugs Tim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/23/2014 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thx Tim ...Seren
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 11:22:00 PM
    Finally you see! Now let's sit and share a tea..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/23/2014 7:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Make it coffee and I will be there....Seren