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Nearing My End - You Owe Me

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Nearing My End - You Owe Me

Pre-chorus #2: You turned out to be so mean…you were so heartless… (you 
make me feel like nothin’…make me feel like someone…somethin’ – your words 
pierced me like a pin on the floor)
I’m not haunted by your callous night…don’t pick a fight (with me…we were 
innocent like a newborn infant)
Our friendship oath is pure and full of reverence – 
Then, all of the sudden, you make my heart thump with bewilderment 
Our love was genuine before you discarded it with revilement…we need to seek 
repentance
You owe me – pay off your debts now…how I loathe your resentment!

Chorus: Ahhhh….Stop being a tease…
Ahhhh….Being a tease…(my heart broke into two)
Ahhhh….Here’s a wound to mend
Ahhhh….Please, put my mind at ease
Ahhhh….You don’t see me, nearing my end…
Ahhhh….Nearing my end…(you’re left without a clue)
Pre-chorus: I thought your grass was green…I’m hopeless… (Oh funny, I 
thought you were a good person…I was there for you through thick and thin – 
you do not love me anymore) 
I’m through with you...you…tonight…I long for God’s light (to shed on me…we 
were in content & we were pleasant)
You turned out to be so mean…you were so heartless… (you make me feel like 
nothin’…make me feel like someone…somethin’ – your words pierced me like a 
pin on the floor)
I’m not haunted by your callous night…don’t pick a fight (with me…we were 
innocent like a newborn infant)
Chorus: Ahhhh….Stop being a tease…
Ahhhh….Being a tease…(my heart broke into two)
Ahhhh….Here’s a wound to mend
Ahhhh….Please, put my mind at ease
Ahhhh….You don’t see me, nearing my end…
Ahhhh….Nearing my end…(you’re left without a clue)

Give me an excuse or a reason
To overcome these waves of emotions
Friends come and go like season to season
Dealing with vile clashing commotions

We landed on a dead end – 
falling victim to regret!
I don’t mean to offend…
Bu we must pay up emotional debt

Our friendship oath is pure and full of reverence…we must accept that we all 
need help, going through this circumstance – (we met in a odd place out of the 
blue)
Then, all of the sudden, you make my heart thump with bewilderment 
Our love was genuine before you casted it away with cold-blooded malice and 
discontent…we need to seek repentance (I got to really talk some sense into 
you)
You owe me – pay off your debts now…how I loathe your resentment!

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