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  1. Date: 12/13/2014 1:59:00 AM
    sunbaked Mississippi Mud Pie? ...Rajat

  1. Date: 10/17/2014 7:20:00 PM
    You're most analytical when it comes to haiku. I love the image that this one creates. I imagine a nice countryside where a little girl is making mud pies by a farm house... ahhh it's good to be back on the Soup! I've been gone too long...

  1. Date: 8/26/2014 6:43:00 PM
    excellent lesson thank you. also an excellent haiku. i see how you layered in between the line possibilities. like the mud pies that suggest a child is most likely involved. or a very old person who for some practical reasons should probably be in hospital.

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 7:50:00 AM
    A good haiku and a lesson. Now I'm looking a the haiku that I just finished writing, ummm???

  1. Date: 7/24/2014 2:21:00 PM
    hi Debs......I am happy to be back in The Soup and very pleased t o see you still giving it your all -as they say. Tanya sends love too....and we are currently on vacation from the dreadful school work....but i t doesnt last long enough really.... OK...hope to chat later .....kindest wishes...Syd

  1. Date: 7/23/2014 9:45:00 AM
    Aha!!I am favouring this exceptional haiku.Kash is back ..He visited my poetry few days ago.So glad.

  1. Date: 7/21/2014 5:17:00 PM
    Nice, Good luck, Debs.

  1. Date: 7/21/2014 3:12:00 PM
    I actually thought of a child coming from the wet outdoors to find her/his mother's baked treasuries in the kitchen, before I saw your comment below. Such a little gem of a haiku!

  1. Date: 7/21/2014 2:55:00 PM
    Interesting write by you Debi.Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 7/19/2014 10:51:00 PM
    Great poem Debbie.. I really appreciate your notes that make the work more enjoyable