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  1. Date: 4/12/2014 8:13:00 PM
    A nice sensual piece of poetry, well written.

    thirtyseven Avatar scott thirtyseven
    Date: 4/13/2014 7:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I hope you don't mind if I quote your "to spit the devil out and wash my soul.", to my church going friends. This is a unique, fun way of putting it.
    Berdoo Avatar Larry Berdoo
    Date: 4/13/2014 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Scott. I was starving that day for new ideas. So I tried it, people liked it. I was surprised. I will leave the romance department for others. Well Scott, I was just heading out to church, to spit the devil out and wash my soul. Thanks for stopping by.
  1. Date: 4/2/2014 10:51:00 PM
    Very flavorful poem. You have a typo - recipe is the correct spelling. Very nice, sensual work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

    Berdoo Avatar Larry Berdoo
    Date: 4/3/2014 8:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mattew, I'm glad you like it. Steping out of my area of write. It's positive always here on the Soup. Thanks for the heads up on my ~~recipe~~.WRITE ON!~~
  1. Date: 4/2/2014 9:49:00 PM
    A nice passionate romantic write. Love your last two lines. Well written. love phyl

    Berdoo Avatar Larry Berdoo
    Date: 4/3/2014 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Phyllis, I take a romantic poem very serious. The poets here on the Soup who write with this style; well I believe that comes from inner wellness. Thanks for your reply.
  1. Date: 3/31/2014 6:23:00 PM
    Reading another long comment you made for me. I hope you might start telling me these things at my poems. I don't know when people have left me notes on the comments i made at their own poems because I did not like getting so many notifications in my mail. So sometimes I come back to see if I ever saw a particular poem and I happen to see the old reply a poet had made for me at my last remark there.

    Berdoo Avatar Larry Berdoo
    Date: 3/31/2014 9:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Only at the poems I read. Excuse me for any mix ups. Larry Berdoo.
  1. Date: 3/31/2014 5:25:00 PM
    Passionate lines penned..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

    Berdoo Avatar Larry Berdoo
    Date: 3/31/2014 5:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mrs. Kendrick, always a pleasure when you stop by.
  1. Date: 3/31/2014 5:17:00 PM
    Hey Larry, this is so good; highly rated. Love the combination of food and love...both are an art in themselves...and both could be very satisfying :) // paul

    Berdoo Avatar Larry Berdoo
    Date: 3/31/2014 5:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Paul, your a man who has a heathy appetite when it comes to this type of writing.
  1. Date: 3/31/2014 3:11:00 PM
    A stunning write Larry. Very well written very clever. well done. best wishes. Pete.

    Berdoo Avatar Larry Berdoo
    Date: 3/31/2014 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Pete, for your kind reply.
  1. Date: 3/29/2014 10:40:00 AM
    Like two magnets! Great piece you've spun here Larry!

    Berdoo Avatar Larry Berdoo
    Date: 3/29/2014 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Keith, like I told others trying new ventures. Finer thoughts are in order.
  1. Date: 3/28/2014 9:25:00 PM
    Love the play of words at the end. I did that expression in a limerick once and had great fun with it.

    Berdoo Avatar Larry Berdoo
    Date: 3/29/2014 4:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea, thank you. Its so easy for me to write dark poems. I really want to steer away from that. Today thats who I'm not. When I read the talent here on the Soup,or a poem by famous poets, it just seems to be their souls are pure with thought. That sheds an ugly light on my attitude on life. The Soup is a positive therapy for the human heart and mind. So I'm going to do only my best, with my own Berdoo Style, and move foward. Anyway, cooking is also a hobby of mine.
  1. Date: 3/28/2014 7:27:00 PM
    Greeting dear Larry, awesome presentation, great idea depicting a love feast. Too much fast foods no time to stop and smell the lamb. Alofas. Tiaua.

    Berdoo Avatar Larry Berdoo
    Date: 3/28/2014 8:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Tiaua. I'm trying new ideas. How does one learn if we don't try? Thank you for stopping by.