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Let There Be Peace

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Let There Be Peace

Let there be peace! the door to co-existence has not, so many keys and creating minorities is definitely conflict's niece. Let there be peace! Forgiveness and tolerance makes all live at ease. If discrimination is given a chance hatred, it will lease. Let there be peace! why do we allow unnecessary negativities put us under hot quiz and unfortunate repercussions, at us they laugh and tease? Let there be peace! If dwelling on differences does not cease everyone will pay the huge fees. Let there be peace! tasting the bitter fruit of war even if it is a piece takes away good conscience. The plenty suffering it gives our sense of humanity they seize. Let there be peace! Are we lower than the bees; that we can't fly and create together? Are we less matured than the geese; that we cannot sing and dance by the waters together? No, we aren't! Let's live in peace and act higher up the Animal Kingdom where we are, to live void of wars, please......

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  1. Date: 7/29/2014 9:00:00 AM
    Soup mail

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 7/29/2014 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ok
  1. Date: 4/24/2014 9:15:00 AM
    Absolutely wonderful Mr. Makama! I love it!!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 5/1/2014 2:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Jean
  1. Date: 4/2/2014 6:03:00 PM
    oh how i love this! a great write and a great message. so wonderful to read you again.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 4/7/2014 10:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Mark Cotterman
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 4:49:00 PM
    Funom, this is a really good piece. Like the message and the flow is good, goes really well with the content. Rob

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 4/2/2014 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Robe Carter... I really do appreciate your comment
  1. Date: 3/29/2014 9:56:00 AM
    I love the wonderful message you give in this poem. Let there be peace and let us learn to share and care. AWESOME. love phyl

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 3/29/2014 12:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes Phyllis... Thanks a lot for your encouragement
  1. Date: 3/29/2014 5:30:00 AM
    This is a very lovely inspirational poem with it's wonderful message of peace my dear friend Funom. I love it and hand salute for this excellent write and song. Thank u so much for sharing and it's such an honor to read it this afternoon. Thank u so much as well for stopping on my poem. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 3/29/2014 12:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh Leonora Galinta... What more can I say? Thanks a lot
  1. Date: 3/29/2014 2:18:00 AM
    I love the message and feeling in your poem... You pinned a powerful point here... always~ Linda

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 3/29/2014 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Poet Destroyer
  1. Date: 3/28/2014 1:47:00 PM
    Much better!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 3/29/2014 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Richard for your encouragement
  1. Date: 3/27/2014 7:07:00 PM
    Hi Funom, consider substituting inclusion for discrimination in line nine. I don't believe you were wanting to promote descrimination based on the rest of this fine piece of writing.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 3/28/2014 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so so so soooo much Richard... I will rephrase that line to make its meaning plane.. Thanks once again for all your encouraging words