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'Crystal White Falling'

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'Crystal White Falling'

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We lay together warm as kittens as crystal snow fell outside,
     The light of my life stirred in his sleep, murmuring;
It is all clear as crystal now, all the events came like a wave,
               He kissed me with lips as sweet as the whispering wind.

                         Our love a jewel and a rose to treasure.

"Don't go!" I whispered to him as I faded off to sleep, cozy in bed,
     Life is a journey with a destination unknown, time is a thief;
Like a swarm of butterflies I was being chased into bitter reality,
                 The telephone was ringing, ringing, ringing and ringing.

                            I am lost in a swirling storm of grief, forever.

The voice on the telephone left me broken hearted, shattered,
    On a road my love lay dead as the crystal white snow fell;
I am on a roller-coaster of emotions that take me up and down,
                    The crystal white falling always reminds me of him.
                     
                             Pages of time turn but I always turn them back.

_______________________
March 16, 2014

Verse

Written by Broken Wings

For the contest Metaphor Crystal, Sponsor, nette onclaud

1st Place

     



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  1. Date: 3/21/2014 5:52:00 PM

    Reads like a winner for it is packed with emotion..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 6:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your great write and well-deserved win my dear friend BW! TYSM for sharing as well. May I also have this chance to say TYSM for appreciating my poem in your One line poem contest. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

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    Date: 3/21/2014 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Leonora
  1. Date: 3/19/2014 4:30:00 PM

    Hi Broken, :) Congratulations, with your winning poem in "Nette O's CRYSTAL: metaphoric, contest." LUV~LINDA

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    Date: 3/21/2014 7:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda.
  1. Date: 3/19/2014 10:27:00 AM

    Oh man BW...not sure what to say. It's so beautiful yet so tragic. Your final line is a resonating stinger....who wouldn't turn them back?

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    Date: 3/21/2014 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you FJ.
  1. Date: 3/19/2014 3:22:00 AM

    This is so beautiful, deserved the win. Congrats Ron

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    Date: 3/21/2014 7:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ron.
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 11:07:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest of Crystal, constance

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    Date: 3/21/2014 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ram.
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 9:51:00 PM

    Congratulations..... SKAT

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    Date: 3/21/2014 9:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Skat
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 4:50:00 PM

    This tragic story is too real ... too heart-breaking. Though, Beautiful..... Well written, Constance.

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    Date: 3/21/2014 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carrie
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 2:03:00 PM

    a pensive write that sparkles, my dear constance.. warm congrats on your great win in my challenge!.. huggs

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    Date: 3/21/2014 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you nette.
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 1:54:00 PM

    a heartfelt piece...a great one!! ..Congratulations on your grand win!!!

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    Date: 3/21/2014 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Aiyah
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 1:47:00 PM

    congrats on such a fine win :) // paul

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    Date: 3/21/2014 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Paul
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 1:04:00 PM

    Simply Perfect!

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    Date: 3/21/2014 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dave
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 1:03:00 PM

    - B.W. - congratulations on your great win in contest : CRYSTAL - A beautiful poem ! (Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 3/21/2014 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne Lise
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 12:38:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win Broken Wings! Verlena

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    Date: 3/21/2014 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Verlena.
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 11:19:00 AM

    Masterful.... superb, loved it!

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    Date: 3/21/2014 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Keith
  1. Date: 3/17/2014 11:36:00 AM

    heartbreaking but beautiful, my friend. a sure winner. Hope you and the kitties are having a good day. Today is 16 years since we lost our Pads (I know you'll understand how it still feels) x

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    Date: 3/21/2014 10:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jack
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 10:41:00 PM

    I believe we have found a 1st place winner for Nette's contest! I haven't written mine yet, and I need to, just that it might be extremely difficult to come up with a poem that can beat out this gem! Your last line is tremendous, and so real! I feel that way at times, but I usually look ahead and not backwards! Did this occurrence actually happen in life that you express perfectly within your piece? I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this evening! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

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    Date: 3/21/2014 10:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 4:53:00 PM

    wow, Constance. You are so good at taking a theme like Crystal and creating such a touching poem from it. This will be high on the winners' list, I am sure.

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    Date: 3/21/2014 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 1:30:00 PM

    Broken Wings, Very Moving.. We never know what the moments will bring! Good use of the metaphor. Best wishes in the contest!

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    Date: 3/21/2014 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dave
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 10:20:00 AM

    Beautiful..and yet so sad. That last line leaves a haunting memory. // paul

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    Date: 3/21/2014 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Paul
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