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In this world so perfectly

In this world so perfectly

A small child laughs, a baby cries
As flowers touch the sun
A small bird sings a song of joy
Cause he knows that dawn’s begun
What hazy shades of bliss this be
As all, it feels like one.

A rabbit frolics on the lawn
As parrots in the trees
Give out their shrieks of pure delight
As dancing on the breeze
The trees fill me with mystic magic
And give my heart such ease.

It’s not the same as yesterday
When I never saw those things
My heart, it now is open wide
And sweetness to me brings.

The fountain burbles in delight
My heart just sings a song
I love the whole wide world today
I feel that I belong
To this world so perfectly
Where nothing’s right or wrong.

12 March 2014 @ 1513hrs.

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  1. Date: 3/14/2014 1:31:00 AM
    This poem reads like sheer delight:) And the last line is profound, love the wisdom in your poems, Peter.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 3/14/2014 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Vindu, I rlly appreciate your very kind words....Peter
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 10:17:00 PM
    I agree with Dave, this probably is one of your best poems that you have written, and might even be your best! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem thus evening! What a lovely and heartwarming piece, Great Work!!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 3/14/2014 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russel, your comments always inspire me....peter
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 9:13:00 PM
    Peter, I think this is the best poem I've read from your pen, definitely one of the best Ive read on the site!!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 3/14/2014 3:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Dave, you are so kind with your comments. I appreciate....Peter
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 7:16:00 PM
    i wish i could agree with your last lines, peter! to me, there's so much wrong in the world. i wish i could share your pure delight in everything but i do love reading it!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 3/13/2014 8:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorry, I meant to say non acceptance, of ones self. I slipped up....lol
    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 3/13/2014 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're absolutely right about this Ilene. This world has gone totally insane, and it makes me sick, but when I am saying nothing right and nothings wrong I mean when your are at peace with yourself, rather than having those inner wars. because of the non existence of oneself. Most of us spend all our time tying to be how other people want us, and this causes constant troubles within the Psyche. I hope you understand what I am trying to say. Inner peace is the most beautiful thing one can have. I appreciate your kind comments, my friend...Peter