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Life in a Liquor Bottle

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Life in a Liquor Bottle

He dives into a liquor bottle, and
Zigzags like a snake on the sand.
A wife waits for her hero,
But who comes as a zero.
Obscenities ooze from his ‘stupor gland’.

(My limerick which was selected and  published in Selected Poems Anthology 2013 by  Pendle War Poetry, U K)


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  1. Date: 8/3/2014 10:55:00 AM
    Very clever limerick - they are usually humourous but this is deep and serious - so glad it got published - Kudos! Hugs Jan xx

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    Date: 8/3/2014 10:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Jan
  1. Date: 7/13/2014 10:19:00 AM
    I like this one, Fabiyas. Alcohol ruins many a good man!

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    Date: 7/13/2014 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Andrea
  1. Date: 3/18/2014 10:10:00 AM
    Awesome limerick. ... Skat

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 10:21:00 AM
    Cool write!!! Enjoyed