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To the left curved the steep roadway. She veered right. Any other day she’d have hesitated. This time, though, she carried through. With the ocean in full view, she accelerated!

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  1. Date: 6/12/2014 2:43:00 PM
    Now you have me wondering did she hit the water or turn on time. I have never tried a tail rhyme. Nicely done. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/13/2014 8:08:00 PM
    Short, nice, and cool poem. Delight reading.

  1. Date: 3/30/2014 4:40:00 PM
    ANDREA, Congratulations, on your win... Always & Forever...... Linda

  1. Date: 3/25/2014 9:09:00 AM
    Intriguing content, one wonders whether the character went straight into the water with the vehicle. Form is unique, flow smooth and action, fast. There's a certain urgency in the lines, and leaves food for thought. Cynthia

  1. Date: 3/25/2014 8:19:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 3/25/2014 12:41:00 AM
    Very lovely poem. Congratulations on a fine win, andrea

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 9:47:00 PM
    And the moral is keep left. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 7:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. So sad but perfectly executed. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 6:30:00 PM
    You veered right too. I knew it was a winner. Congrats Ron

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 6:18:00 PM
    A chilling write..a bit different for you, but I like it..makes one think. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 2:56:00 PM
    Congrats Andrea. Such a sad write.

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 12:55:00 PM
    I saw this sorrowful write landing right here in the winner's circle.. Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/17/2014 7:58:00 PM
    Well gotta be right some time. Great visuals. well done Pete. take care Pete.

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 7:47:00 PM
    Saw a lady driver at a round a bout today , The road ahead totally clear , She waited and waited until eventually a car came from the other direction, The lady accelerated , The other driver was shouting , Oh dear , How unfortunate , or words to that effect . I thought of this poem then .

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 3:02:00 PM
    Ohh, love this dark one - a sure winner : )

  1. Date: 3/10/2014 6:01:00 PM
    I know what you're doing ... : D This is for Susan's contest and "we" know she likes "dark" poems! I got you! : D Best of luck in her contest.

  1. Date: 3/9/2014 10:02:00 PM
    clever and thrilling.

  1. Date: 3/9/2014 8:24:00 PM
    Not a happy poem Petal, I've had to ponder this comment for a while, sadly I've known a few that have taken their own lives, when you put yourself in their shoes looking at their temperaments and the issues that led them to end it, sometimes you can see their logic. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 3/9/2014 4:27:00 PM
    So sad, to know that some people even think about suicide. As I said, it's the age of anxiety. I'll never understand It all. Great write Andrea....peter

  1. Date: 3/9/2014 6:19:00 AM
    Right or left, it is always wrong. Very well expressed. I read the blog by Eileen. My poem "The Happy House" did not rate. Would appreciate some feedback. Thanks always. Take Care Ron

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