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ARMS IN RHAPSODY

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ARMS IN RHAPSODY




Somewhere between our song, he is there like a delicacy on my tongue; on my fingertips he burns the silence on my eyelids, and even the pang that he leaves is a blaze in itself. And what is compelling about the maleness of this star is how his glance can still reach me in circles of adagio movements even when he is not around. As fast as speeding thought, he rules over me… sending a thousand revolving wings to shade me from the sun, fountains to wash me away… then i am gone, done into the rhapsody of his arms. And even the pang that he leaves is a fire in itself that simmers like oil in me… till the falling of another evening, when once again he takes his laughter in my sky to flare in my heart like a night keeper rising an octave of love’s syncopated heaves, trailing one beat ahead of me. Feeling The Love Contest Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot 2/12/2014

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  1. Date: 2/26/2014 6:18:00 PM
    Wonderful poem, Nette., Congratulations, on your win, thank you for sharing, and helping the reader Feel The emotions of Love through your poem. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 2/21/2014 8:48:00 AM
    Wonderful use of musical metaphors and quite sensual imagery. Congratulations, Nette!

  1. Date: 2/21/2014 4:05:00 AM
    Amazing Netty! Feelings beautifully expressed! Congrats on ur win !!

  1. Date: 2/21/2014 3:50:00 AM
    This is wonderful. Congrats, Nette!!

  1. Date: 2/19/2014 8:02:00 PM
    Congrats on the win Nette. A great work you did here,

  1. Date: 2/19/2014 6:39:00 PM
    You are awesome!!! This was such a joy to read and a fav!! Nette---WOW

  1. Date: 2/19/2014 5:34:00 PM
    nette, this one just had to take 1st place! some beautiful imagery and lines; romantic and haunting, polished and flawlessly executed - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

  1. Date: 2/16/2014 8:48:00 PM
    Nette, your poems take my breathe away!! This one is absolutely beautiful!!!

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 8:55:00 AM
    Yes, the last line boosts up the miracle here. Excellent feeling is brought in to poetic words. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 5:37:00 AM
    Ahhh this is poetry, lovely work Nette there are times I sit back and sigh after I read a poem this is one of them 7 from me and fav'd, thanks for the read and the comment on my poem it was appreciated love Jayne x

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 8:17:00 PM
    In love with all these words...before and after I had to find a couple in the dictionary...ahhh nette your words oooze..beauty

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    Date: 2/15/2014 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Showing my ignorance again.:-) :-) :-) loving learning these lovely lovely words...thank you for being so awesome
  1. Date: 2/14/2014 4:55:00 PM
    Dear Nette: So nice, the way your words flow into pictures-moments. Lovely feelings in-sync with heart and soul. Leon

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 4:03:00 PM
    This is so, so beautiful and so relaxing to read. Thank you so much. Many blessings and happy Valentine's day.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 2:38:00 PM
    Quite beautiful nette.....Hugs Tim

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 2:28:00 PM
    Jimminie! This is so intense, sweely sedcutive and well penned! I like your ' love' poetry , Nette-- very sensory and top-rate!

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 2:14:00 PM
    Poerty in motion, sensual and affectionate in the space of pove. And the metaphors speak so eloquently about it.Beautiful delicacy, Nette!

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 1:57:00 PM
    - 1.Beautiful - 2.Beautiful :)))))) - (Lovely smell in nice bottle ... no roses :) - HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 1:53:00 PM
    Nette firstly ; beautiful secondly; beautiful....David