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Grapefruit Fantasy

One pair of toasted hands arise
O’er a ball of sunlit mustard splay   
One yellow dress goes dancing through the wind
Silk hair unpinned 
The rustles of a jadely grass, 
Eyes half shut to buttercups of gold
She releases beauty 
Like papaya whips of noonly breeze, 
Upon a cluster  
Of budding lemon trees,
Un-thatching scents of lemon chiffon hues,
O’er a painter’s brush stroke,
The scenery murmurs
Of mellow sunsets glow  
She un-braids the honeycombs of summer, 
And her amber aura’s glee is caught  
Between the artists hand 
And the canvass of his dreams 
"A Piccadili’s Grapefruit Fantasy"

February 9, 2014
Contest:  Here comes the sun for Francine Roberts 

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  1. Date: 3/31/2014 7:42:00 AM

    simply beautiful mystic your use of the yellow hues wisped me off into another place thank you , and for your win

  1. Date: 3/2/2014 3:51:00 PM

    Your poem just bursts with yellow. Le jaune vous avez tres plus. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 3/2/2014 3:38:00 AM

    Enjoyed the write on the life-giver Sun. Congrats on the win, vie

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 10:48:00 PM

    this is so creative, Vie. You have one of the best imaginations of anyone at Soup. Congrats for your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 10:40:00 PM

    Congrats on the win M.R . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 7:59:00 PM

    Very different and lovely. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 6:50:00 PM

    Congrats on the win. Very nice write. Ron

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 5:11:00 PM

    congrats on your yellow win, just what I was looking for

    Rose Avatar Mystic Rose Date: 3/1/2014 8:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Francine for honoring me in your contest, xxx
  1. Date: 2/20/2014 12:05:00 AM

    Hullo, sister Rose Mystic. I think this is one of your best poems. A lovely blend of colours, scents and flavours that flow along smoothly.

  1. Date: 2/13/2014 5:52:00 PM

    Rose I love this. A fabulous and beautiful poem. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/13/2014 9:06:00 AM

    This is have thought of sunny images in so many colorful ways! A delight!

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 5:17:00 PM

    nice to read.

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 4:14:00 PM

    Very nice write Rose. Hope it is a winner for you. I enjoyed....peter

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 12:23:00 AM

    "ambers auras glee..." I love that.

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 5:46:00 PM

    A WINNER!!! BRILLIANT my dear neighbour! Loving hugs, Jack XOXOX

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 5:05:00 PM

    Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading your uniquely creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 9:06:00 AM

    A mastery of surreal imagery is displayed in this piece. This poem flows like "One yellow dress goes dancing through the wind"—Bravo, Poet!

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 7:35:00 AM

    Beautiful! You painted a wonderful summer scene with your words. I love the line "she un-braids the honeycombs of summer"

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  1. Date: 2/10/2014 4:50:00 PM

    Dearest lady are you ready for my newest poems brace yourself lol. cheri

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 4:15:00 PM

    Hey Baby Girl! Whenever I See Your Precious Pic I'm Thinking, What A Tender As Beautiful Heart She Must Hold: Coupled With Her Ever Creative As Classic In Wonderful Verse *:*(* Your Beauty, Always Makes Me Smile ~ My Love, Forever, John ... Ps., A Very Beautiful In Picturesque Painting: Soft, Pastel Hues ~

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 12:09:00 PM

    fruity and sunny like you, vie.. enjoyed your remarkably delicious piece.. sweetness and huggs to you!

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 9:54:00 AM

    Wonderful write as always my girl I'm back little magi at least for today. lol so i posted something new could you go me a great big favor it's longer than my usual could you maybe take a quick look and let me know what you think. please cheri

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 7:28:00 AM

    MR, What can I say this is a beautifully and tastefully written poem, good luck in the comp, 7 from me, thanks for your very kind comment on my poem much appreciated love Jayne x

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 5:37:00 AM

    Baby Baby Baby this is great...David

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 4:32:00 AM

    - The taste is like sunshine - your poems is always shining M.R. - Luck in contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 2:49:00 AM

    What a delightful read, Vie! I am faving it. 777s.

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 11:29:00 PM

    This write displayed a grandiose emotion to it spiced up by the color yellow! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! You have surely delighted me by the splendor of this wonderful piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 10:04:00 PM

    Another great one M.R.,have a great day.

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 7:52:00 PM

    I must also add, MR....the playful hues of grapefruit are mesmerizing! I am printing this to post on my poetry wall of inspiration and goin' to mine faves! Thanks!