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It

His girlfriend looked at it and laughed.
"it is awfully small."
She asked " what do you want me to do with it?"

He responds "it is what it is, it has been this way for many years.
I have tried playing with it, hoping I could make it bigger.
Perhaps you can give it a try?"

She ponders "This is the first time I have looked at it so closely.
I have to admit, it is awfully cute. I think it is perfect the way it is."

He smiles "I guess you are right, after all what can we expect from 
two little letters. This is the first time I have considered it.
I have to admit it is a pretty impressive little word. 

With that they went about their day and didn't give it another thought.


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  1. Date: 2/22/2014 7:50:00 AM
    Super cute and super funny. Don't know what I was expecting, but that wasn't it. ;P Great write!!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/22/2014 9:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, I didn't know what to expect either, It just came out this way.
  1. Date: 2/16/2014 8:38:00 AM
    Oh, what a clever fun little read. I like it. I wrote a poem awhile back titled it too. You might enjoy it. It is such an interesting little word. It has huge cache for it's size. Don't you think? :) Peace.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/16/2014 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will check it out Robert, pun intended! And yes it has huge Cahe*lol*
  1. Date: 2/11/2014 4:37:00 PM
    you have me in stitches Rick excellent pen hugs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/11/2014 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Shadow.
  1. Date: 2/11/2014 12:11:00 PM
    Very creative Richard, It, just shows how good of a poet you are.......Roger

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/11/2014 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again Roger.
  1. Date: 2/11/2014 11:03:00 AM
    Ha, ha....cute and funny, thanks for the laugh. Hugs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/11/2014 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, hugs back.
  1. Date: 2/11/2014 7:56:00 AM
    a master of inuendo that is my son.! I must say I get much pleasure from his diversified writings. Proud to be his mama Love you Rick MamaBear Edith

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/11/2014 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was inspired by your Flag Pole poem.
  1. Date: 2/10/2014 10:14:00 PM
    Mother of GAWD this was funny as hell!!!!!!!!!!!! No compensating in these lines.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/11/2014 7:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha ha!
  1. Date: 2/10/2014 8:58:00 PM
    It is perfect the way it is!!!! Oh I needed the chuckle....thanks....

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/10/2014 9:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I meant oblige.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/10/2014 9:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha ha, glad to ablige.
  1. Date: 2/8/2014 7:14:00 PM
    Well if you think you led my mind down the dark alley with this write, you'd be spot on lol. Cleverly written Rick, and I don't think we've seen the last of it. Take care, Richad

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/8/2014 8:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    *lol* thanks Richard.
  1. Date: 2/8/2014 7:03:00 PM
    ha! very clever!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/8/2014 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks ilene.
  1. Date: 2/8/2014 11:15:00 AM
    : D! Sorry to hear about IT! Very funny, Richard.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/8/2014 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha ha! Thanks.
  1. Date: 2/8/2014 11:12:00 AM
    Nice Richard..You had me going for a while...Tim

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/8/2014 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Just what I had hoped for.
  1. Date: 2/8/2014 11:07:00 AM
    A funny one Richard, yet with its peculiar teaching; if we should look well at anything nomatter how small,we may end up with a pleased result.Great as usual Richard.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/8/2014 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good one Kayod5.
  1. Date: 2/8/2014 9:22:00 AM
    YOU ARE VERY NAUGHTY, RICHARD!!!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/8/2014 8:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;0)