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  1. Date: 2/12/2014 8:45:00 AM
    Dark but brilliant . I looked up Stephanie and you have captured her. I also see a quite wicked sense of humour . Enjoyed this my friend.

  1. Date: 2/7/2014 4:55:00 AM
    Nice use of descriptions and imagery Rose, excelling stuff so far . I haven't read the whole thing as yet, as I'm on a time limit. But I had to stop by and say warm greetings. However, I will be back to read the rest...hugs.

  1. Date: 2/7/2014 2:37:00 AM
    Incredible metaphors....

  1. Date: 2/6/2014 1:39:00 PM
    You are a powerful storyteller, and this one is a dark and magnificent Gothic-like tale. Bravo, Poet!

  1. Date: 2/6/2014 9:09:00 AM
    Fantastic story. Eerie and gripping. Love the shadows scattering under the mattress. If the shadows are scared and hiding, we should be too.

  1. Date: 2/6/2014 12:08:00 AM
    Wow, this is a tremendous write my friend! You have really put together an incredible poem here this evening! What a delightful piece this is, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 10:49:00 PM
    This is lovely..I love the line"The sound of her breath is like a dry matchstick as she listens to a ticking clock on an old burlap stump"....Hugs Tim

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 10:27:00 PM
    Oh wow an excellent write, outstanding! A great piece, very deep. I love it darling! :) xoxo