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Snow Falling On Cedars

I hear the creak of a winter morning A touch of silver snow fills an awning A breath of wind sweeps the cyan sky God it is lovely, I can’t help but sigh Away from the noise of the city walls I’m a south-ling birdie with inside calls A pen thought away, from the Cedars Green tipped in trunks of toffee cigars I know the sound of a shovel, it’s gray And the sun regretfully, shivers away Down to the south, where birdies fly God it is cold here, I can’t help but cry. Mystic Rose Feb. 05, 2014

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  1. Date: 2/8/2014 12:06:00 PM

    Wow..Vie...I feel strange calling you that. Is it OK I call you that...I always think of beautiful roses when I think of you..:-) ? Anyway...I have to send this straight to my favorite list so I can read again when I'm blue....I love it....its perfect...

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 3:05:00 AM

    This is an excellent write...I could taste the isolation...the clarity...of a cold sky...I also ...felt the need to sigh. These lines lingered in mind...long after i read them...especially the third stanza...also...made me want to cry...

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  1. Date: 2/6/2014 9:03:00 AM

    Great images! Winter has a stark beauty, but the cold gets hard to take.

  1. Date: 2/6/2014 8:21:00 AM

    Very beautiful and very true this winter... we are all shivering a great deal :) Really enjoyed this Mystic !!

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 11:16:00 PM

    I am crying here. had to shovel 3 times today....Hugs Tim

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 10:24:00 PM

    Nicely done here, another great poem, So full of imagery and description, nice write. :) xoxo

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 10:34:00 AM

    NICELY PENNED! Wonderful rhythm!//Sinclair

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 8:16:00 AM

    Yes, it is quite cold here too my friend! This is a fabulous write here Vie! I really enjoyed reading this phenomenal poem this morning! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!