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  1. Date: 2/6/2014 4:47:00 AM
    I am the seeker of winds/Earth was mine,I damned each constillation when ancient ones.renamed me Orion..Two of my favs lines Awesome

  1. Date: 2/6/2014 2:06:00 AM
    I am the seeker of winds/Earth was mine,I damned each constillation when ancient ones.renamed me Orion..Two of my favs lines Awesome

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 7:55:00 AM
    Interesting work for the contest..I am sure Debbie will love this one..Thanks for the honor of being in your winners' list..It is a delight to be there..Sara

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 1:12:00 PM
    Cyndi I like this a lot, but I love the way it transmogrifies as it hurtles through (space) woods, though soundless roar= oxymoron... love the subtlety of the 12th line i.e.. all time (and space) roam., and Caleb is a religious name Hebrew meaning astute, brave all relating to warrior/hunter...don't think this could be the last stanza as it ends drifting in space....David

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 12:46:00 PM
    honey bun it's great BUT its a finale - finale in 7? & the last 3 lines I don't get unless you are making it myth which is fantasy [duck] and be becomes Orion? I LOVE the beginning - is the bear dead? or alive is caleb alive or now dead as orion? L & L caffine!

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 11:59:00 AM
    Very Awesome, Cyndi, I never seen the references to the stars until you pointed it out. You're right, it's all there. Wow! Amazing! hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 11:57:00 AM
    Cyndi, whatever else happens wth this aside.....I LOVE IT! I can't even tell you how many nights I've spent on the edge of the woods, looking up at the sky....after a hunt...or before one. And the sense of belonging I have there, like I'm just an animal under the stars. This made me think of just that. I absolutely love it.