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SWEET RELEASE

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SWEET RELEASE


An evening pink casts ripples from afar
Where lovers dip into a pool of rain
Emblazoned by some hundred fleeting stars;
As whispers blow on raindrops to proclaim
The height of a thrill in hours unrestrained.
Upon the sail of leaves that binds wrapped kiss
The pearl-like drops guide hands in sweet release.

Across the sky, the fresh of morn appears 
To close a rendezvous that cannot last,
While gentle words in silken phrases tear
The hem of day erupts  as they depart
O duty of war slits meshing of hearts.
But time well spent in joy is everything
While showers pour kismet, awaiting spring.



Romanticism In Rime Royal Contest
Sponsor: Gautami Phookan
by nette onclaud


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  1. Date: 2/26/2014 10:05:00 PM
    Nette, ,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 2/16/2014 6:16:00 PM
    You have your own way with words, Nette. Splendid reading. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/16/2014 1:29:00 PM
    Congrats Nette.

  1. Date: 2/16/2014 3:58:00 AM
    Beautiful piece on Romanticism, Congrats on the win, nette

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 12:21:00 PM
    Sometimes it is nice to just sit in a deck chair put your hands behind your head and soak in the wonders of a beautiful day. This poem gave me such a moment.

  1. Date: 2/5/2014 7:09:00 AM
    Ah Nette the sheer romance of this is stunning great pen and gl in contest hugs

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 11:42:00 PM
    Romance thru your lines is to die for, this is so gorgeous.

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 7:34:00 PM
    Wow Nette a beautiful piece you have written here! I really enjoyed it, great write, very romantic! :) xoxoxo

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 4:27:00 PM
    An outstanding one that you are noted for,gl luck in the contest nette. Kayod5.

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 3:19:00 PM
    Beautiful words Nette, just beautiful....I wish you luck in the contest....Peter

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 10:45:00 AM
    Another blazing romance Nette, how many more do you have up your sleeve? I much enjoyed this read, soupmail

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 10:18:00 AM
    You create quite a romantic setting with your words and the style, impeccable!

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 10:04:00 AM
    This is such a beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! You have amazed me by the splendor of this romantic poem Nette! What a gorgeous piece, quite the enchanting poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 9:48:00 AM
    Gautami should like this one. Good luck with your entry.

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 9:10:00 AM
    Time should stop just to live in this moment. The stanza about joy, is so true. I like your approach!... Lol, your comment on my piece. A dog needs a beware sign, especially, when we bite before barking. Seriously, my B.Boy needed attention.

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 8:50:00 AM
    Phrases of passion from a brilliant creative, beautiful pen! 7+, My best Nette, chuck

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 8:31:00 AM
    - Oh .... sweet spring ... with beautiful romance - Thank you dear friend, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest. - Have a great Tuesday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 8:09:00 AM
    Romantic, indeed, my dear Nette! Again...I'm amazed by your word chose. No idea how you can come up with it....I'm still stuck in the common...there you go lighting up the sky with these kinds of phrases....whispers blow on raindrops...sail of leaves that bind wrapped kiss....amazing. Hugs