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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 2/12/2014 12:23:00 AM
    You do write beautifully. Love your imagery!

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 11:25:00 PM
    This is a very creative and descriptive poem. It is the kind of dreamy poem that the reader can just get lost in. I love it when a poem can take me away from reality for awhile. Very nicely done, Vienna! I liked the Shrek references, by the way! :) Congratulations on your win, as well!

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 7:21:00 PM
    You seem rather possessive.sorry I couldn't resist *lol* I like your take on the contest. Congratulations Rose.

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 11:41:00 AM
    Nicely penned! Congrats on your win!! Thanks for your visit on my recent work, Rose.

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 6:17:00 AM
    Enjoyed your write on castle and congrats on the win, Vie

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 12:07:00 AM
    very good Vienna more castle description would have been nice. I do love the almost spiritual feel to it congrats on placing ty for entering Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 8:00:00 AM
    Creative, beautiful, with a determined stance. I love that it is your castle, and your choice when to open the gate.

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 11:42:00 PM
    A beautiful, stunner write, Vie!

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 4:02:00 PM
    Hello my darling Mystic! It's been a while since I've commented, and what a poem to drop in on! Such a creative and lovely write! Very creavtive! I love it Mystic, hope you are doing well! Write back soon! :) xoxo hugs

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 11:47:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this poem very much tonight. Thanks for sharing and good night.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:13:00 PM
    A fanciful write. Enjoyed reading this.

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 10:25:00 AM
    That last line.........LOVE IT! YOU GO, GIRL! Lovely rhyme...Castle of paraffin air also got me...Such interesting imagery...honestly....My mind can't EVEN begin to be that creative. I try to grasp for new words and I come up with tried and true. Lovely MR....HUGS

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:28:00 AM
    Now I have the urge to see Princess Bride & Lord of the Rings. This was a charming read!

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:15:00 AM
    I will shamelessly admit, I felt a sense of power when I wrote this, grin, anyone care to leave me a comment, feel free, I'll smile some more later, when I check in, and until then, have a wonderful day, may all your dragons be either asleep or tucked away today, luv & smooches, your one and only Rose, xxx