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Its My Castle, My Gate

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Its My Castle, My Gate

Quote: “Champagne moments such as these recall the sun, 
And display the bares of a mystic’s fabulous scry”

She walks through sea, diving out of the rain With yellow pin rays, in her blue suede affair The Eagles fly in, tap n’ flap through her pyre, With a dip, and a soar, in the halls of psyche; As the sun files the moon, the stars hold the night And he plays up a starry old tune, Black and white, like her Rune; Have no fear, just come here, To my Castle of paraffin air; I'm Fiona’s old ring, from Lord Farquaad’s lair, Take the stipend Dear Man, It's from a girl, with a gauntlet of truth; No need to slay, what is snoring away, I’ll singe his tail, when he’s ready to wail, Go ahead open gate, after all, It’s My Castle, My Gate…
January 28, 2014

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  1. Date: 2/12/2014 12:23:00 AM
    You do write beautifully. Love your imagery!

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 11:25:00 PM
    This is a very creative and descriptive poem. It is the kind of dreamy poem that the reader can just get lost in. I love it when a poem can take me away from reality for awhile. Very nicely done, Vienna! I liked the Shrek references, by the way! :) Congratulations on your win, as well!

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 7:21:00 PM
    You seem rather possessive.sorry I couldn't resist *lol* I like your take on the contest. Congratulations Rose.

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 11:41:00 AM
    Nicely penned! Congrats on your win!! Thanks for your visit on my recent work, Rose.

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 6:17:00 AM
    Enjoyed your write on castle and congrats on the win, Vie

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 12:07:00 AM
    very good Vienna more castle description would have been nice. I do love the almost spiritual feel to it congrats on placing ty for entering Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 8:00:00 AM
    Creative, beautiful, with a determined stance. I love that it is your castle, and your choice when to open the gate.

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 11:42:00 PM
    A beautiful, stunner write, Vie!

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 4:02:00 PM
    Hello my darling Mystic! It's been a while since I've commented, and what a poem to drop in on! Such a creative and lovely write! Very creavtive! I love it Mystic, hope you are doing well! Write back soon! :) xoxo hugs

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 11:47:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading this poem very much tonight. Thanks for sharing and good night.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:13:00 PM
    A fanciful write. Enjoyed reading this.

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 10:25:00 AM
    That last line.........LOVE IT! YOU GO, GIRL! Lovely rhyme...Castle of paraffin air also got me...Such interesting imagery...honestly....My mind can't EVEN begin to be that creative. I try to grasp for new words and I come up with tried and true. Lovely MR....HUGS

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:28:00 AM
    Now I have the urge to see Princess Bride & Lord of the Rings. This was a charming read!

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 8:15:00 AM
    I will shamelessly admit, I felt a sense of power when I wrote this, grin, anyone care to leave me a comment, feel free, I'll smile some more later, when I check in, and until then, have a wonderful day, may all your dragons be either asleep or tucked away today, luv & smooches, your one and only Rose, xxx