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  1. Date: 2/3/2014 5:21:00 PM
    Gail; This is so touching, it made me cry. I don't have a son. I have a daughter but it hurts just the same. Like Owen says - I hope it' not true..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 2:36:00 PM
    Hi Gail this is very moving hope its just words and not truth, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 7:37:00 AM
    oh Gail my heart bleeds for you sensational moving write Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 3:51:00 PM
    very sad and touching write, Gail

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 1:50:00 PM
    A deep and poignant write Gail..

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 8:18:00 AM
    This is an unimaginable sorrow. I had hoped it was an artistic expression but in reading the other comments I see that is not the case. While your son has breath, there is hope that he will become who he is meant to be. A mothers prayers are a powerful thing and I am sure you pray for him constantly. Hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 6:49:00 AM
    I applaud you Gail for writing this emotional, exceptional heartbreaking poem. My hope is that you gained solace in the writing it. Hugs from me. Anne

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 10:49:00 PM
    Heartfelt Gail, ........Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 10:17:00 PM
    This is a very heartfelt write on these tearful years you've had to endure my friend! I just want you to know you can SoupMail me at any time if you want or need someone to talk to! I may not know what it feels like to be in your situation but I have plenty of empathy for you Gail! My heart goes out to you! What a tremendous piece you have written! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 8:15:00 PM
    Gail, A beautiful piece, very moving. S