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Happy Hour

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Happy Hour

The definition of a hustle play
No point in crying over yesterday
I lost myself inside a drunken kiss
Day one and I'm already over this

I never had a valentine before
Whats worth the time and effort anymore?
Don't be a nickel looking for a dime
Its always peanut butter jelly time

I really wanna have a bullet scar
Tuition should include an open bar
Well, changes happen for a reason right?
Don't ask her on a straight tequila night

*Compiled from Pentametron couplets, no edits.

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  1. Date: 3/11/2014 8:20:00 PM

    Darn funny. Great atitude, you move on, enough character for two men.

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 5:45:00 PM

    I truly enjoyed the rhytm of this piece. It appears your experiment was a success.

  1. Date: 1/21/2014 8:25:00 PM

    Had a happy time reading this. Liked the line don't be a nickel looking for a dime...did you pen it, or is it an old saying?

    Jerden Avatar Roy Jerden Date: 1/21/2014 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I constructed the poem from Pentametron couplets, so I didn't actually write the lines. Kind of an experiment, really. Google Pentametron.
  1. Date: 1/21/2014 7:38:00 PM

    Nice references..Very enjoyable read. Tim