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SUNCATCHER, A SONNET FOR CHARMAINE

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SUNCATCHER, A SONNET FOR CHARMAINE


Delighted, I return to the stained glass

studio in a dream. A Maltese Seraph
 
is nigh, pleased by crafted canvasses.
 
Peace plays in her illuminated laugh

for she is moved by both the fired art

and wholesome scenes piously framed

in elongated windows. Pure light darts

between beauty forged by artistic fame 

and the burnished backs of horses pulling carts

on the village street. St Jacobs, a plain land

praising simplicity: a message of heart

heard in her voice, seen in the lay of  hands.

But a wink teases as she lifts suncatchers, 

seeing sweet figolli in each pastel patch.




*Figolli is a Maltese cookie decorated with bright icing and enjoyed at Easter.
Like two dimensional Easter Eggs ;)

This is to our friend, an angel of Soup, who is from Malta.

St Jacobs is a Mennonite Village. It is common to see people drive by in horse and buggy.
Old order Mennonites wear clothes of another century. The women wear prayer caps and 
pinafores, calico dresses, no make up, no adornments. The men wear black suits, 
black hats, solid shoes.

LOVE YA, CHARMAINE! 

A BLOG WILL BE WRITTEN TONIGHT ,<3  I have much to say about my word choice on 
this contemporary sonnet (meter-less and with no rigid syllable count).

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  1. Date: 2/11/2014 8:06:00 AM
    She is a darling, too talented, incomparable and inspiring! Scribe ML

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 4:21:00 PM
    Tnks sweet friends..I love you all : )

  1. Date: 1/21/2014 12:10:00 AM
    A damn fine dedication to a tremendously heartfelt poet. There was a lot of joy & happiness in these lines. Rightfully so. Title is as advertised. :)

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 4:00:00 PM
    This brings smiles to my face, Charmaine is a treasured poet here at soup, and you did her justice with this lovely sonnet, I would be honored if you wrote one about me, I can't wait to see what u come up with, sending my love, and excitedment, if that is a word at all, if it isn't well, hurry on along now, call the Webster man, and let him put it in, cuz excitedment, should be considered a word, right? xxx

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 1:21:00 PM
    "[...] by both the fired art and wholesome scenes piously framed in elongated windows"!! Such a stunning tribute to our dear Charmaine-Suncatcher ; she will love this sonnet, Cyndi!

  1. Date: 1/20/2014 12:45:00 PM
    WoW..I'm speechless!!!Still finding the appropriate words for such an enchanting sonnet..I looove it.I just googled St.Jacob 's land images,and it looks amazingly beautiful,blissed and serene.I see me living there,and I see me in a buggy driven by a horse ,along with you and a bunch of friends..Sweet figolli are delicious ..If I was your neighbor..We would share. This sonnet is so eloquenrly written and much more than a simple lady like me deserves..I'm in awe..Blush Blush..Tnks and much love-C

    Rose Avatar Mystic Rose
    Date: 1/20/2014 4:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Heh Charmaine, I have been to St. Jacobs and it is a lovely place, they have a great market place where you can buy fresh produce, and haggle with the vendors, over the price of their tomatoes, If you're ever in my neck of the woods, I'd gladly take u there, love you Mua!
    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 1/20/2014 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Don't be shy! : D
  1. Date: 1/20/2014 12:45:00 PM
    Going to my favs... : )